Her legs are supposed to be a little foreshortened in this picture.
It’s hard to tell because of the background, but the reader is supposed to be looking down at her a little.
Okay, let’s see if I can find the right words. PLEASE don’t think I’m trying to be insulting or patronizing. >_< I'm really not, I'm just trying to say this right.
It's important for the foreshortening to take place over the whole body, and to make it clear you're looking at the body from above, using the top-down angle.
Show the top of the head and shoulders, make the head prominent and full size, then let the rest of the body gradually shrink and foreshorten as far as you need, as you work your way down.
In Sharona's case, it's a nice opportunity to show off her cleavage, of course, but keep in mind her bosom would also obscure a larger part of her torso than usual from a top-down angle.
In this particular image, the head and torso are full-size, seen at full-frontal angle, which makes the foreshortened legs look a bit out of place – to me, anyway, and I admit that it could easily be me.
Nice composition! ^_^
Her legs seem a bit short, maybe…?
Her legs are supposed to be a little foreshortened in this picture.
It’s hard to tell because of the background, but the reader is supposed to be looking down at her a little.
Would you be terribly offended if I gave a few suggestions?
No problem. Feel free.
Okay, let’s see if I can find the right words. PLEASE don’t think I’m trying to be insulting or patronizing. >_< I'm really not, I'm just trying to say this right.
It's important for the foreshortening to take place over the whole body, and to make it clear you're looking at the body from above, using the top-down angle.
Show the top of the head and shoulders, make the head prominent and full size, then let the rest of the body gradually shrink and foreshorten as far as you need, as you work your way down.
In Sharona's case, it's a nice opportunity to show off her cleavage, of course, but keep in mind her bosom would also obscure a larger part of her torso than usual from a top-down angle.
In this particular image, the head and torso are full-size, seen at full-frontal angle, which makes the foreshortened legs look a bit out of place – to me, anyway, and I admit that it could easily be me.
Love the red top, bikini bottom and thigh highs match the fire background not to mention work well with the twin swords.
Thank you!
Girls Night Out, you say? “Fun isn’t something one considers when balancing the universe. But this does put a smile on my face.”
Mine too! 🙂