At the risk of sounding weird, it’s nice to see a penis! It can get pretty silly when there’s lots of female full frontal nudity, but the guys are always covered by a strategically placed plant or captured from an odd angle or something.
Apart from that, the last story was probably the best one yet, and I look forwards to the new one.
It doesn’t sound weird at all. I have never understood the logic behind showing female frontal nudity and then going out of their way to avoid showing male frontal nudity. Personally, I find all the jumping-through-hoops-to-avoid-showing-male-frontal-nudity to be more distracting than if they actually showed it.
Thank you for the kind words about Blood Moon Rising. It was a little off-beat and I wasn’t sure if everybody would be into it, but I’m glad you like it!
Hey, what’s not to love about a story that starts out as a caper, becomes sword and sorcery action mated with Arabian Nights for a bit, then turns wistful towards the end and rounds off as a softcore-porno/comedy? Possibly that last part should have been longer though! 😉
Seriously though, the lack of a conventional action climax and a real bad guy was a very good idea!
Thank you! I’m so glad you liked the way it went. I try to do something a little different with each story if I can.
Actually, when I get around to releasing it as an ebook, the last part probably will be extended, since I always add extra pages to my ebooks to give readers a reason to buy them!
The bias may well be that many people agree female nudity is appealing, but male nudity is not. Or at least not every part thereof. 😉 You know the joke: “If genitals aren’t evil, why were they designed by Geiger?” And at least the ladies’ equipment is internal, rather than external.
I also have a theory that there is a tendency to assume the traditional majority of people who read erotica are going to be men, and that they do not want to see another man’s tackle near the pretty women because they want to fantasize about their own being in such proximity – and because they feel threatened if the male characters’ tackle is bigger or prettier than their own.
Duh that’s what makes it hot you wuss.
I believe this is what they call: “Unclear on the concept”. 😀
The night of Sharona’s deflowering?
…… Or just the night of her first threesome?
This is actually taking place in the present.
Details of Sharona’s not-so-distant past will appear as sepia-tone flashbacks.
Ah, I see! ^_^ That’ll be quite convenient. Thank you for telling me.
No problem. I probably should have been a little more clear about that in my description.
Somebody needs a Brazilian bikini wax won’t mention her name.
😉
To paraphrase the adult actress Stoya: “If you think a pussy with hair is icky or ugly, you’re not mature enough to be touching one.”
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Words to live by!
At the risk of sounding weird, it’s nice to see a penis! It can get pretty silly when there’s lots of female full frontal nudity, but the guys are always covered by a strategically placed plant or captured from an odd angle or something.
Apart from that, the last story was probably the best one yet, and I look forwards to the new one.
It doesn’t sound weird at all. I have never understood the logic behind showing female frontal nudity and then going out of their way to avoid showing male frontal nudity. Personally, I find all the jumping-through-hoops-to-avoid-showing-male-frontal-nudity to be more distracting than if they actually showed it.
Thank you for the kind words about Blood Moon Rising. It was a little off-beat and I wasn’t sure if everybody would be into it, but I’m glad you like it!
Hey, what’s not to love about a story that starts out as a caper, becomes sword and sorcery action mated with Arabian Nights for a bit, then turns wistful towards the end and rounds off as a softcore-porno/comedy? Possibly that last part should have been longer though! 😉
Seriously though, the lack of a conventional action climax and a real bad guy was a very good idea!
Thank you! I’m so glad you liked the way it went. I try to do something a little different with each story if I can.
Actually, when I get around to releasing it as an ebook, the last part probably will be extended, since I always add extra pages to my ebooks to give readers a reason to buy them!
The bias may well be that many people agree female nudity is appealing, but male nudity is not. Or at least not every part thereof. 😉 You know the joke: “If genitals aren’t evil, why were they designed by Geiger?” And at least the ladies’ equipment is internal, rather than external.
I also have a theory that there is a tendency to assume the traditional majority of people who read erotica are going to be men, and that they do not want to see another man’s tackle near the pretty women because they want to fantasize about their own being in such proximity – and because they feel threatened if the male characters’ tackle is bigger or prettier than their own.
Of course, I can be completely wrong. *shrug*
Add “today” to that last line and it’s a great Clerk’s homage.
On topic, I am amused that blondie seems a tad uncomfortable.
I’m sure Sharona won’t have any trouble making him feel comfortable again. 😉
The first page and Sharona’s already naked 😀 That’s a promising start!
Just wanted to make sure I had everybody’s attention! 😉
He’s an outfit i’d love to see Sharona in. http://danique3d.artstation.com/projects/lGakY Or maybe encounter the woman already in it. Before getting her out of it.
That’s a cool design! I always give Sharona a new costume with every new story, so you never know…